Welcome to Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today's snippet is a couple of sentences later from last week.
If you missed last weeks snippet, here's the link:Chapter 5 #7
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Set up: Steven has left and now Kait has decided to hang on Alan. Michaela isn't too pleased.
***Note: Snippet has been modified to fit the 8 sentence limit. Fancy punctuations to make this one work. lol 
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She threw her arms around his neck, draping her body over him as if she were a blanket. Alan gave Michaela an apologetic shrug, as he did his best to keep Kait’s hands from fondling him.
Michaela found herself perturbed with Alan. Why didn’t he just tell her to leave him alone?
“Oh Alan, ye see how…” Kait purred, leaning close, her mouth near his ear as if to tell him a secret or nibble on it. Michaela strained to hear what Kait whispered to Alan, but only a few words floated back her way: …loch… cool breeze…
The sporadic words may not make sense alone, but the way the woman rubbed her body against Alan like a cat in heat clearly indicated what her intentions were. Michaela shouldn’t care, but she did and if she didn’t stop clenching her teeth, she’d end up breaking a tooth.
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Is there a dentist in the house? lol
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Oh, Kait’s trying to stake a claim, but I get the impression the ground’s not soft enough. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Siobhan,
Thanks so much. 🙂
Well that Kait needs to be brought down a peg or two!
Millie,
So true.
Hum, I wonder why he didn’t push Kait away already.
Linda,
Oh don’t worry, he’ll send her home. lol
Ugh, that woman.
Poor Alan . . . that’s the price he pays for being irresistible. 🙂
Sarah,
lol- too funny, but so true.
And here I thought someone was going to get a punch in the jaw…
Nice snippet — I love the body language!
P.T.,
Thanks so much.
Terrific description and how I wanted to drag her bones from him. What happens next? Always the question.
Nice job, just hope she has dental insurance or it could be a $3200 bill (LOL–it’s a joke from real life and my book, “Mr. Short, Dark…& Funny”).
Nancy,
Too funny! I work for a dentist. I know how expensive dental care can be. lol
Charmaine,
There’s always something. lol
It’s more than past time for someone to lay the smackdown on Kait!
Carrie-Anne,
Any volunteers. lol
Love the last line 🙂
Sherry,
So glad you do. 🙂
Kait’s trying hard!
Elaine,
Too hard. lol
Great scene, loved the line about breaking a tooth, we’ve all been there!
Gemma,
Yes, we have. lol
Fun snippet. Makes me wonder if there’s some reason he has to be nice to annoying Kait. I could certainly visualize the scene and I don’t blame Michaela for gritting her teeth!
Veronica,
Alan is very patient with her. Annoyingly so!
“…like a cat in heat.” What a perfect visual! 🙂 This story is getting good! 🙂
Teresa,
Thank you!!
Good snippet, I could hear a bit of a brogue Kait and definitely hear the teeth grinding from Michaela.
Chelle,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet.