Welcome to Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today's snippet is a couple of sentences later from last week.
If you missed last weeks snippet, here's the link:Chapter 5 #6
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Set up: While Steven and Kait argued who was up next to throw darts, Michaela wanders over to the framed photographs lining the walls in a grand tribute of days-gone-by. Alan decides to join her. Enjoy the snippet...
***Note: Snippet has been modified to fit the 8 sentence limit. Fancy punctuations to make this one work. lol 
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Alan's right arm brushed against her, his body so near she could smell the sea salt and the spicy scent that was all him.
“Anymore headaches?” he asked, peering at her with concern.
“No headache.” But her heart picked up a few extra beats whenever he drew near, but she kept the
phenomenon to herself.
“Hmm... that's good,” he said and took a step closer, his hand landing on her waist. The dark centers of his eyes dilated until she thought she would melt into them. Again she had the distinct feeling he wanted to kiss her, but fate didn’t seem to be on their side.
“Alan,” Kait whined, drawing his attention back to her with a deep sigh of regret.
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Yes, I know. Kait is a pain in the potootie! lol
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Kait, Kait, Kait… we’ll have to leave you at home the next time. 😉 SO close. 🙂 Good 8, Karen.
Teresa,
lol– You are so right.
Damn Kait, go away, go away!!!
Love the sexual tension and the slow build up which is thwarted once again!
Gemma,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet. 🙂
Just when you think it’s safe. . .Kaitus interfere-us happens. Good eight.
Charmaine,
lol- so very true!
Kait needs to find something else to do. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Siobhan,
Yep, Kait does need to back off. lol
I agree with Siobhan — Kait need a new hobby!
PT,
Yep, she does. lol
And now I’m left with the strong urge to push Kait outside and shut the door LOL. Very well done excerpt, sooooo close to that kiss and then…Kait happens. Loved it!
I’ll just join the chorus: Darn it, Kait! Go sit on Steven’s lap or something! 😀
Kait’s very interfering, but very believable.
Sue,
Thanks so much. 🙂 I’m glad Kait’s believable.
Oh, so close. Don’t you love oblivious friends like that. Fun snippet.
Alexis,
Thank you. Don’t worry Alan and Michaela will have their moment again.
Someone needs to put Kait in her place, and fast.
Carrie-Anne,
All in time. 🙂
Oh my gosh darn goodness Kait, how many men’s attention do you need? I think I’d fake a headache and a need for fresh air : )
Millie,
lol– Love your suggestion!
Kait needs a distraction of her own. Nice scene.
Sherry,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet. 🙂