Welcome to Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today's snippet is a couple of sentences later from last week.
If you missed last weeks snippet, here's the link: Chapter 5 #4
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Set up: We're skipping a few paragraphs. We find out Steven is from Arizona. Hyatt makes the comment they're surrounded by Yanks, but offers Steven a place at the table, while giving a subtle warning to him about Kait's flirtatious ways. Enjoy!
***Note: Snippet has been modified to fit the 8 sentence limit. 
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Hyatt snagged a chair from the table next to them before Steven could refuse. “Where are our manners? For sure he’ll be joinin’ us. See if George willnae give ye a bottle, hey?” He winked at Kait. “Seein’ how ye dated him, he might be more obliged to give in to ye.”
“That was a long time ago, Hyatt and doonae bring up ancient history,” she warned and whirled away, her blonde hair flying behind her.
After sweet talking George with just a few words to give her what she wanted, she leaned over the bar to give him a quick kiss on the cheek then headed back to the table with her prize of glasses and bottle to share.
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Was Hyatt subtle or not?
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Weekend Writing Warriors for Eight Sentence Sunday
Oh, Kait’s exx boy-friend. Interesting, maybe that will keep her away from Michaela.
Linda,
There’s more to come. Just wait. 🙂
Fun snippet, warm and enjoyable.
Gemma,
Calm before the storm… 🙂
Charming with her blond hair flying. I like your breezy style of writing.
Charmaine,
Glad you were charmed. 🙂
Enjoyed reading this snippet–can’t wait to see what’s next
Nancy,
Stop by next week for more. 🙂
Hyatt is subtle compared to Kait—but almost everyone is! 😀
Sarah,
Isn’t that the truth. lol
Heh, hopefully Steven is smart enough to catch the reference to Kait’s liaisons. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Siobhan,
Let’s hope so. 🙂
I’m still waiting to find out if he’s Michaela’s boyfriend from back home…
PT,
No, Steven is not Michaela’s boyfriend, but it doesn’t mean Blake won’t show up later. 🙂
Subtle? Well, no, not by my definition. LOL
Kate,
No? lol
Let’s hope Steven was paying attention to the warning flags. Another really well done scene, I feel as if i’m in the pub with them. Great snippet!
Veronica,
I’m glad you feel that way. Pull up a chair and stay awhile. lol
Interesting bit of relationship history! Nice.
Love the pub atmosphere.
Sue Ann,
Thanks so much.
I like the look into their past relationships.
Carrie-Anne,
Keeps it real, doesn’t it. 🙂
Love the dialogue- the dialect you have them talking in is wonderful. Great snippet.
~Decadent
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It might have been ancient history, but she still managed to work it! 🙂