It's Six Sentence Sunday and This is the 6th snippet from The Spirit of Love. It's a Celebration at my KMN Books Blog. Lots of Holiday Cheer and Prizes. KMN Books Blogspot.
If this is your first SSS, here's a quick update: Brynna and Travis lost their son (Jake) due to a tragic accident. Instead of turning to each other they drifted apart. However, they own a Ghost Hunting business and they were scheduled for a night at the Queen Mary. This is the first time they have seen each other in months. Travis is baring his soul...
(Travis is speaking first.)
Now for the six:
"It haunts me that I wasn’t strong enough for you. Brynna?” he said, his voice thick with emotion as he spaced out each word evenly. “How many days has it been since you moved out of the house?”
“It seems like a lifetime, but it’s only been a week.”
“You believe it’s only been a week?”
She frowned, confused by his question.
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Sounds mysterious! Nice six, Karen.
Kate,
Thanks so much.
Now I am intrigued. Loved this snippet.
All the best…
Sarah,
Thanks for stopping by. I’m glad you were intrigued. 🙂
Intriguing!
Taryn,
Glad you were intrigued. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
Intriguing 6, and she seems genuinely sincere which makes it even more intriguing. Something paranormal going on?
Angela,
There is definitely something paranormal going on throughout the story. It unfolds gradually and it is revealed,but it might not be what you expected. 🙂
Hmm…you’ve got me thinking. So very interesting. “You believe it’s only been a week?” <– love intriguing lines and this hits the spot.
Sidney,
Glad to have intrigued you. 🙂
Whoa! Intriguing and totally unexpected. Excellent six!
Jess,
Glad the six intrigued you to know more. 🙂
Ohh, now you’ve piqued my curiosity. This one’s on my iPad, but I haven’t read it yet. I’m really curious to know how much time has passed. great six!
Joanne,
Thanks, Joanne. When you have time to read it, you’ll have to let me know how you liked the story. 🙂
Thanks for coming by.
Sounds like he has reason to think it’s been more than a week. BTW, is he baring (uncovering) his soul, or bearing (carrying)?
Sue- yep you’re right. This is why I shouldn’t set up a blog post at 1:30 in the morning. lol Thanks.
She believes it’s only been a week? *gulp* I’m cuing up the scary music now… 😉
Silver,
lol– I can definitely hear it, too.
Ooh nice and mysterious 🙂
Sandra,
Perfect– It’s what I was going for. 🙂
Intriguing six. Reading it, I’m like, “Wait, what–what happened to her?”
Tune in next week for the next six…
Thanks so much for coming by. 🙂
Intriguing six with an edge of heartbreak. Nice.
Thank you, Jerrie. I’m glad you enjoyed the snippet.