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Twirl and Dip (WIP) Drake's POV

The knock at the door made him tense and he put the container down.

"Drake, we need you up front in ten," the person on the other side called.

"I'll be there," he said. He used to love to go on stage and sing his heart out, but they've played so many venues, non-stop for the last three years that he was burnt out. He wanted a break from it all.

His phone buzzed and he glanced at the number and the photo that popped up and pursed his lips. It was his last girlfriend. They broke up two months ago, but she wanted to get back together with him. Once he made the break from her, he realized the mistake it had been to hook up with her in the first place. He just didn't see it until he had some quiet and he could think. The woman did love her parties.  

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Eastyn has her soda shop to run and specialty ice creams to create. Only the place is falling apart, and she may have a haunted jukebox that chooses songs to communicate. If things couldn't get any more complicated, Drake, her ex-fiancé, returns home after five years on the road with his rock band, Never Mind the Damage. 

Eastyn vows not to fall for Drake's charms again, but when you have a lifetime of memories with the man, the heart seems not to care about pledges. Her haunted jukebox believes choosing the right song to twirl and dip to is the answer to everything. However, Eastyn isn't convinced. She wants to know if Drake is home for good, or will he break her heart all over again?

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22 thoughts on “Twirl and Dip #8sunday #SnipSun #snippetsunday”

  1. He probably needs to stay away from that former girlfriend–avoid her like the plague–and go for something entirely different. Nice snippet!

  2. Well, it sounds like he might be ready to settle down, but then I wonder how long before the call of the stage lured him again?

  3. Enjoyed this little peek into his thoughts and heart…another excellent excerpt. sound slike maybe he’s a tiny bit older and a tiny bit wiser…

  4. He can see why he might be burnt out. I hope he ignores that phone call.

  5. interesting excerpt and yes, i’m not surprised by the burnout. hopefully he’s thinking about his ex with a clear head though.

  6. Peace and quiet can give you the time to figure out what was right in your face. Looks like he did. Burnout would be hard to live with. To keep going when you’re done. Poor guy. Maybe he needs a good break.

  7. He’s coming to his seses–recognizing that the woman was all about parties and the rockstar lifestyle. He’s ready for something different. Great way to show that, Karen. 🙂

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