Snippet Sunday: Magic of the Loch (Chapter One #3) #SPeekSunday #8sunday #snippetsunday

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Now for Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today's snippet is continued from last week: Chapter One #3. Click here to read Chapter One #2. In Chapter One Michaela meets Alan and Hyatt for the first time.

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Blurb:

Michaela Grant travels to Scotland for a holiday, knowing this vacation is her last. A medical condition threatens her life and any chance of a future—until she meets Alan MacLachlin, a man forced to exist between two worlds.

Alan is the legendary Loch Ness Monster. Once every fifty years he returns to human form in search of his soul mate, the one woman who can break his curse. He believes he has found forever with Michaela, but to claim it he must figure out how to save her life.

Michaela and Alan vow to take what time has to offer, but another threat looms. A sinister shape shifter with a vendetta against Alan is making Loch Ness his personal hunting ground. Now he’s threatening Michaela. Alan must discover who the shifter is and stop him before it’s too late.

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Set up for the snippet: Present day, Chapter One. The streets of Drumnadrochit were buzzing with the news of recent sightings of the Loch Ness Monster. Everyone wants to capture his or her own photo of the legendary creature.  The woman, Michaela is renting her cottage from, gave her the directions to where she could rent a boat for a day. Michaela is on the pier, heading toward the boat tied off at the end when a German shepherd, that is chasing a cat, comes barreling down the pier. Luckily for Michaela, Alan saves her from a falling into the loch.

Alan and Michaela exchanged some heated words, leaving Michaela thinking she doesn't care for her rescuer. this is in Michaela's POV.

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If she possessed the strength, she’d push him in the loch to cool off his hot temper. Intent on giving him an off-handed retort, her mouth opened only to clamp shut again at the sound of a deep chuckle behind her. Michaela turned her head and glared at the new arrival with the warped sense of humor.

“I’m sorry, for my brother’s behavior,” the man, who stood an inch or two taller than Hot Head next to her, announced with a meaningful glint in his eyes. Michaela became on guard. She found herself far away from the Village Green with two men. One not too pleased for company and the other who looked at her as if she were a yummy treat.

“We arnae goin’ to harm ye," the man said with a chuckle. "Might I remind ye, my brother just saved ye from an unsavory dunkin’.”

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Now Michaela has met Alan and Hyatt. Like always, I would love to know what you thought of the snippet. :)

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23 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday: Magic of the Loch (Chapter One #3) #SPeekSunday #8sunday #snippetsunday”

  1. I checked to make sure that the grumpy brother was Alan—I was hoping!

    So much easier for Michaela if her hero was Hyatt, but maybe not as much fun for the reader? 😀

    1. Sarah,

      It would be to easy to fall for Hyatt, but as I post, you’ll realize Hyatt is more complex. 🙂
      Mr. Grumpy has Michaela’s attention. It’s gotta be those eyes. lol

  2. Gotta watch out for those unsavory dunkin’s! Also unsavory Duncans, but that’s another story. Now what’s she gonna say to him next? More important, which will really get her attention?

  3. I’m a bit past this point (and taking a break while I edit my own work) so I’ll just point out that you evidently cut and pasted from a PDF(?) or other work with line-breaks, and the line breaks carried over into your post.

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